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How To - Kuroshitsuji AU by JustZoni How To - Kuroshitsuji AU by JustZoni

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This is the second part of my Kuroshitsuji fan fiction tutorial! This time, I am focusing largely on alternate universe fan fiction. However, even if you are not an alternate universe fan fiction author you will find this tutorial useful. I hope you enjoy it!

Looking for part one? You can find it over here: [link]

Yes, this tutorial is longer than the original. This particular tutorial is more than thirty thousand words long.

Here is what I cover:

What is an alternate universe?
What makes a good alternate universe?
Open and Closed Universes
Kuroshitsuji and Alternate Universes
Deciding on a New Reality
Creating the Rules
Adapting Characters
Pairings in Alternate Universes
Building Plots

Much like the original tutorial, this tutorial will occasionally be updated as the manga continues. Please add me to your watch list to be alerted when this tutorial is updated!
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loveforart101 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I think that this is a really really great guide. You have just done a great service for fanfic authors.  

If I may ask, since your not a fan of AUs do you ever read them or have seen a good ones?

I am a fan of all type of well written fanfics. I can see what you mean about keeping true to the series and about people wanting to read fanfics about the canons. I think AUs are also good & can be refreshing to write and I can say I don't think its an insult to the writer of the series as long as they are well written and respect the canon. Like the new black butler movie is a big AU with a new master & time period and Yana Toboso approved it ( said it was her dream to have a Kuro film) so I don't think it will be an insult to her or her work to see AUs.

I really think it would be nice if you got a DD for your guides they are great and everyone should see them. I really love how detailed they are and how you encompass every aspect of writing a fanfic. Thank you for your time.
JustZoni Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I actually have to say that I am no longer in the Kuroshitsuji fandom. So, when you ask if I've ever seen a good AU, I can say that I have - but never for that fandom. My current fandom, however, has a couple of fics that are downright impressive in the way of AU. My fiancee is the author of a particularly poignant AU piece that I recommend to people very frequently. However, my current fandom is vastly different from Kuroshitsuji, and thus has to be judged on different merits.

Thanks for your support on my guides. I have more that I intend to publish in a couple of months for other writing-related things. I do hope you'll keep an eye out for them.
loveforart101 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
I see and if I may ask, did you grow out of it?
 I like the show ( season 1) and the manga but I am not sure if I want to get into the fandom to much. I have read one decent AU from that fandom but it was never posted online. I can see what you mean about not really finding good ones in that fandom because I tend to find the same type of stories. I understand different fandoms so different merit.

Your welcome and I will be keeping a watch out for your great work :)

JustZoni Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love Kuroshitsuji, but the fandom (when I was involved) was incredibly icky. The people were very petty and bitchy, very clique-y. I got tired of all the drama. And I found a new, much more enjoyable fandom that I have greatly enjoyed participating in. Kuro was just way too political. That and I got some severely creepy fands in the Kuro fandom.
loveforart101 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
I understand completely and it seems like it has gotten worst. Kuro has become more popular and I am not sure if that is the reason why but the fandom is starting to get a bad reputation ( forums online are even starting to write about it). I have had similar experiences with the bitchy and cliquey thing, and also I have been seeing quite a few fans act like they know better than Yana Toboso, when it's her story. But what is your new fandom it sounds pleasant?
JustZoni Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I love Yana Toboso, but right before I left the fandom, she did some stuff that I can't really get behind either. For lack of a better explanation, it's like she started to become her own fangirl. It just didn't feel right, and I felt like she had lost her original fervor for her story. She also started slipping things in that felt like she was flipping the bird at her editor. And, frankly, when the author starts acting as childish as the fandom, it's a problem. 

I am part of the UKISS fandom. They're a Korean band. Don't throw tomatoes at me. Trust me, I had that reaction, too. The fandom, however, is really great. And the band is... like something out of yaoi manga, seriously. If you get curious, I typed up an intro to them, over here.
loveforart101 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
I was never really a part of the fandom so I really wonder what she was doing? Because you are not the first that I saw who has said that she kind of became her own fangirl. A while back someone had posted a journal on DA of why they stopped doing Kuro fanart and it was something similar, like Yana was becoming like fangirl & it was starting to show through the story and the fandom was becoming more aggressive etc.

lol :D don't worry no tomatoes. I'm not really into yaoi but a nice band with a nice fandom is worth checking out so thanks :)
JustZoni Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yana did a whole crapload of shit. One of the things that I think helped finish off my taste for it was her bringing anime-only characters into the manga. You could tell that they weren't supposed to be in the manga in the first place, and the cameos tended to be awkward. But she always seemed so damn happy about it. Personally, I find that a little grating. She also began taking too many shots at her editors, and went over-the-top with the boys love content in the manga itself. I mean, yeah, we all kind of ship Seb/Ciel, but she literally... shipped... them... with the cruise ship arc. Subtle, Yana. Very subtle.

UKISS has great music and a fantastic fandom. And the guys themselves are hilarious.
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sherlymate Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
wow..that was pretty useful, thanks so much!
CrossAcademy22 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much for having taken time to write this! It really is helpful for me to write my fanfictions! :D took me at least a good few hours to read through the whole contents [as well as your fanfic, "Immortal". I cried at the end of it~! :( very well written though! :)]
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